Tuesday, September 2, 2014

While you wait, part whatever. . .

Here is an abandoned script, written to provide somebody something quick and easy to shoot. I found it on my computer after I had completely forgotten about it for the last 6 months or so.

Anyone who wants to shoot it can. It was designed to be super cheap to film. (The musical number is in the public domain.)

Please forgive the wonky formatting issues.


BASEMENT DECORUM
by ML Kennedy



EXT. ALLEY – MORNING

(POV – running monster) We are chasing a running young person in a hoodie. HOODIE steps onto a box of garbage, steps onto a large garbage can, and dives over a gate. We hear growling as the camera spies on Hoodie getting up off the ground, running to a basement and frantically pounding on the door.

CUT TO:
INT. BASEMENT - MORNING

We still hear pounding on the basement door as a slovenly dressed man in his 20s opens the door. Let’s call him DAVE. Hoodie enters, quickly shuts the door and bars it. The hoodie is lowered revealing a young woman.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                How’s it looking out there, Rose?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Better.

TITLE CARD

INT. BASEMENT – DAY
We are in a semi-finished basement with a fair amount of clutter and well-worn furniture. Unlit candles and dirty dishes can be seen strewn about the room. Rose is leaning against a wall, while Dave is laying down playing a Nintendo DS. He is dressed only in his boxers.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                How long do you think we’re going to have to be down here?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                I don’t know, Dave.

                                                                                                DAVE
I know you don’t know, but when do you think?

                                                                                ROSE
I really don’t have any way of making any sort of useful guess. I mean
my last guess was that these things would be gone by sunrise.

                                                                DAVE
                                                (Still playing)
Yeah. That guess sucked.

                                                                ROSE
Shouldn’t you be saving your batteries for something more practical?

                                                                                DAVE
                                What batteries?
                                                (a glance)
                                Oh. No these don’t take batteries, they plug into the wall.                                                          

                                                                                                ROSE
                                You don’t have to say it like I’m the biggest idiot in the world, you know.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Whatever.
               
                                                                                                ROSE
                                If you wouldn’t have forgotten those tickets-

                                                                                                DAVE
                                What? If I remembered them we might be dead now.
                               
Rose starts to say something then stops herself.

A moment of silence.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Yeah.

Rose goes to light a cigarette, looks around then slides it back into the soft pack.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                I think, in general, that, um, the house’s no smoking rule can be lifted
during apocalypses, monster infestations and things like that.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                I only have ten. I want to ration.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Jesus, how long do you think this thing is going to last?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                I already said that I don’t know.
                                                (A beat)
                                Can you put some fucking clothes on?

                                                                                                DAVE
                                I’m covered. Why are you so sexually oppressed?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                It’s repressed, and I’m not. I just don’t want to see your
                                wangdoodle.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Then don’t look at my wangdoodle. Jesus.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Just put on some goddamned pants.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                It’s my house, and you can’t make me.

LATER

Dave lets out a grunt of frustration as his DS runs out of power. He sets aside the game angrily. We reveal Rose stretching in various Yoga poses on the basement floor. Reaction shot of Dave.

CUT TO:

Dave sits on the couch in baggy clothes.

INT. BASEMENT – EVENING

A few candles are lit around the room.  Rose is sitting on the couch, trying to twirl her cheap butane lighter around her fingers like a baton. Dave enters the room holding an aluminum can in each hand.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                For tonight’s menu I have sirloin burger soup or spaghetti rings.
                                So, basically, you have the option to eat like a seven year old or
a seventy year old.
                               
                                                                                                ROSE
                                Dibs on the rings.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                And here I thought that I was the childish one.

He opens both cans with a mechanical can opener.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Oh, you are. I just don’t eat red meat.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                What are your opinions on, uh, greyish-brown meat?

CUT TO:
 Dave and Rose are sitting on opposite ends of the couch. Each is eating their dinner straight out of the can. They stare forward, idly spooning foods into their mouths. Screams, sirens and what might be an explosion can be heard in the background.  Rose takes a last spoonful, and then holds the can towards Dave to offer him the rest. He smiles at her and politely waves it off.

Dave digs around the bottom of his can with his spoon and starts to sing softly “Cockles and Muscles”.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                In Dublin's fair city, where the girls are so pretty,
I first set my eyes on sweet Molly Malone,
As she wheeled her wheel-barrow,
Through the streets broad and narrow,
Singing, "Cockles and mussels, alive, alive, oh!"
                                (Louder)
"Alive, alive, oh,
Alive, alive, oh,"
Crying "Cockles and mussels, alive, alive, oh".    
(He pauses to turn to Rose,
but she is still looking straight ahead.)

She was a fishmonger, but sure 'twas no wonder,
For so were her father and mother before,
And they all wheeled their barrows,
Through streets broad and narrow,
Crying, "Cockles and mussels, alive, alive, oh!"

                                                                                                BOTH
"Alive, alive, oh,
Alive, alive, oh,"
Crying "Cockles and mussels, alive, alive, oh".

                                                                                                DAVE
She died of a fever, and no one could save her,
And that was the end of sweet Molly Malone.
But her ghost wheels a barrow,
Through streets broad and narrow,
Crying, "Cockles and mussels, alive, alive, oh!"

                                                                                                BOTH
                                                                                (Softly)
"Alive, alive, oh,
Alive, alive, oh,"
Crying "Cockles and mussels, alive, alive, oh".


Things go quiet again. Dave rests his arm on the arm of the couch and rests his head in his hand. The silence is broken by the sounds of a distant traffic accident and screaming.  A moment passes.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Rose?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Yeah, Dave?

                                                                                                DAVE
                                                                (Deadpan)
                                You’ve got a lousy singing voice.

Rose punches Dave in the shoulder and smiles a short-lived smile.                                                                                            

INT. BASEMENT NIGHT –

Dave and Rose haven’t moved from the couch. Each stares forward, blankly. Sirens and yelling can be heard in the background.

LATER:
Rose is lying on the couch while Dave sits on the floor. Scratches, groans and creaks can be heard off in the distance.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Rose. Hey Rose.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                What is it, Dave?

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Do you think we should check out there again?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Yes, we should. . . in the morning.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                It sounds less bad out there. I think we should check it out.                                                        

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Now?
                                                                                                DAVE
                                Yeah!

                                                                                                ROSE
                                To what end?

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Um, what do you mean by that?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                If it is, by some chance, better or worse or the same out there
 then what, pray tell, are you going to do about it?

                                                                DAVE
Well, I just, I don’t know. I just kinda gotta know.

                                                                ROSE
Fuck you, you don’t.

The sound of gunfire, off in the distance.
                                                                DAVE
I’ll be real quick.

                                                                ROSE
It’s the middle of the night. Don’t be fucking stupid.

                                                                DAVE
I’m not fucking stupid.

                                                                ROSE
Listen, let me sleep, 2 hours. Then you sleep after I wake up. After that
it should be light out again and you can go nuts and check out whatever
the fuck you want.

                                                                DAVE
Sleep as long as you want. I’m too wired. I’m, like too paranoid. I’m not               
sure if I’ll ever get to sleep again. I’m just gonna wake you up at the crack
 of dawn and then I am going to check out the situation. You know? I think
I have a tire iron or a crow bar around here or, like, something to protect me.
Protect us, you know? I feel like I should be keeping you safe.

Rose has turned to face the back of the couch. She lets out a sound along the lines of “Uh-huh” but she is more than half asleep.

INT. BASEMENT – MORNING
Dave is asleep one leg thrown over the back of the couch, clutching a tire iron and snoring with his mouth wide open. We see that he is wearing soccer shin pads. Rose reluctantly lights a cigarette.

INT. BASEMENT –DAY
Dave and Rose are standing by the basement door. Dave is wearing a parka, oven mitts, jeans tucked into his boots, Shin pads over his jeans and a catcher’s mask. He’s holding the tire iron in his right hand.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Are you ready?
                                                                                                DAVE
                                I was born ready.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Seriously, though.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                As ready as I’ll ever be?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Okay.

Rose makes slow and deliberate movements. She slides the bar up from the basement door. Rose looks into Dave’s eyes as best as she can through the ridiculous mask. She moves one hand to the door knob, and holds out three fingers with the other.

Two fingers.

One finger.

BANG BANG BANG.

There is a pounding at the door that makes both twenty-somethings jump. 
                               
                                                                                                MALE VOICE
                                Anybody in there?

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Uh, NO!

Rose looks at Dave like he were the biggest idiot in the world.

                                                                                                MALE VOICE
                                Listen, this whole neighborhood has been cleared of monsters.
                                You should be safe to leave now.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                How do we know that you’re not a monster?

                                                                                                MALE VOICE (O.C.)
                                Chris Conte sucks.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                His story checks out.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                How did you get rid of all of them?

                                                                                                MALE VOICE
                                We shot them. . . with our guns. Power should be back up in an
                                hour or so.

INT. BASEMENT – DAY
Rose is gathering her things together.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                So, was this the longest first date you’ve ever been on?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Definitely the longest blind date.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Oh, so, you’ve been on longer first dates?

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Oh yeah. All the time.

Rose heads towards the door.
                                                                                                DAVE
                                You know, I’m pretty sure they rescheduled that show. They’ll
probably let me swap those tickets.
                               
                                                                                                ROSE
                                Dave, you’re a good guy. I don’t want you to take it personally if
 I never want to see you again.

                                                                                                DAVE
                                Oh. All right.

                                                                                                ROSE
                                Hey, I’ve been on worse dates. We had a candlelight dinner,
I got serenaded, you let me smoke in your house, and  uh –
                                                                DAVE
You got to see me in my underpants.

                                                                ROSE
That wasn’t a highlight for me. Look, you’re a good guy, but you’re
always going to remind me of that time I almost died.

                                                                DAVE
I understand. But I’m going to text you, and I’m going to
think about you and that time we almost died.

Rose kisses Dave on the cheek and leaves.

END.


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